Rogermark

Bubink.

'See corrections, good feedback. I invite your editing suggestions and implement them. This is what we

talked about a while back.

I had to get sober and do it w/o that 'drunken' swan dance.

Whadya think of 'Good Intentions?'

Bub

Rogermark.

'I like the corrections and additions, much clearer. Very glad you did this. I'm not sure what your question means, "Good intensions". Do you mean, as in "Good in tensions" with the spelling you used, or the correct spelling, "Good Intentions"? I would suggest you leave "Recipe For Fasting" for now.You can always go back later with new eyes and rewrite. Which is the beauty of a blog, unlike a printed book, it is a very fluid medium. Keep going with this energy flow you have found. Write another piece, ride the wave for as long as you can. Let Otis' "bucketful of word[s]" become a shower of thoughts and words which is the beauty of your style.

Hope your latest bite by your belt sander is healing.'
Roger

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